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Monday, August 23, 2010

Israel Folau


Israel Folau is a talented player that is 21 years of age. He used to play for the cheating team that everyone knows as Melbourne Storm,but moved to my former best team the Brisbane Broncos. He also plays for the almighty Queensland. His height is unbelievable for his age. His strength and shear force would be enough to stop a raging bull from running at him. He is centre, which has a jar full of speed and agility. He is one of my favourite players because he always finds a way to get over the try line even if he has to step,swerve and bump his way.

Moving from the Melbourne Storm was a good idea because if he stayed with them for a little bit longer,he would not have been able to compete for the NRL Telstra Premiership for a year. Which would of stunk badly. He is one of the centres that I admire. He is mighty and he is ISRAEL FOLAU!!!!!

3 comments:

  1. Great post Matthew. What a talented young sportsman he is.
    You paragraphed well, the sentences flow on from each other following the paragraph theme.
    I did get a little confused with your second sentence though. It is very long and covers more than 1 idea. Could you have a go at editing it for me?

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  2. Hi Matthew

    Great post on Israel Folau do you think that one day you'll be as good as him? I like your good vocabulary like strength. Could you please tell me what does shear.

    Anyway keep the good work

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  3. Hi Matthew

    Great post on Israel Folau do you think that one day you'll be as good as him? I like your good vocabulary like strength. Could you please tell me what does shear mean?

    Anyway keep the good work

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